hi girls , I've a story , (i like action so i made this)
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:Prologue:

It’s a hot summer day and the sun is cracking the pavement open in London. And in London was a little place called Kingston-upon-Thames. And in that place was a little town called Molesy. Molesy was where three young guys and 2 girls lived together. The oldest guy Matt, aged 21 was tall, slim, had black hair and had hazel/brown eyes. Then there was Oliver, aged 20 who was tallish, slim, had blonde hair and the bluest eyes. Charlie, aged 18 who was tall, slim, blonde hair and had hazel/brown eyes. Lindz, aged 17 She was tall, slim, had black hair and dark brown eyes .,
Now Matt, Oliver, Lindz and Charlie lived in a little house in the dump part of Molesy with Matt’s partner in crime and best mate Lindz. Lindz had been Matt’s best mate forever.. They also lived with Charlie’s 12-year-old sister Gianna. Gianna was teeny, had brown hair and brown eyes. They had been living together for over a year and a half. Lindz decided to wanted a bit of fun and so arranged to go clubbing with her mates, whilst Matt, Oliver, Charlie and Gianna was at home watching TV.

~*Part 1*~

“Hey this film is wicked man!” Matt said.
Everyone agreed. They were watching pirates of the Caribbeans on BCC1. Then a special announcement on the news came on.

“Hey what’s happening here?” Charlie asked.

The News Reporter said, “We have a special report just coming in. Apparently in the town of Molesy, some diggers have recently discovered a body of what seem to be a female. Although they can’t identify her yet, police suspect it is the body of Karen McKechnie, aged 19 who has been reported missing a few months ago.”
Gianna turned to Matt, “Hey was you dating her a few months ago Matt?”
Matt nodded, “Yeah I did man. It wasn’t like it was going anywhere. But I can't believe she is dead .”
“But I don’t think I’ve seen her since you dumped her.” Oliver said.
“Oh well short world we live in.” Answered Matt.
Matt’s eyes didn’t move off the screen , .

The reporter carried on, “The police have said that they are dealing with a murder case as the skull of the discovered body has been crushed on the left hand side.”
" Matt, are you ok I mean she is Karen !!"Oliver asked.
“God! Let’s just hope it’s not Karen.” Giaana said,..


I'll put the next part soon , I really hope you like it .

I've read the first lines and it looks good I'll be reading it and I'll post what I think later Ok

BRB

ok I've read it ...Nicely written and waiting for the next chapter

*hey that reminds me I have to update my story*

thanx NG ,
oh yay , i'm waiting for yours

You're welcome I did update mine a minute ago

Back..
: part 2 from 11 :

~*Part 2*~

A couple of weeks later, the news reported that the identity of the body was in fact Karen. Everyone was in shock. Lindz was like sisters with Karen.

“Man I can’t believe this is happening. I mean, why would some sick slime ball kill Karen?” Lindz asked while she was crying .
“I don’t know. I hope they find the ****er.” Charlie said.
Oliver asked, “How are you Matt?”
Matt got up; “I can't deal with this right now ..”
And he fled upstairs to his room. Lindz followed him.

~*~*~*~*~

“Matt are you okay mate?”
“It’s just all too much to take in.”
Lindz hugged Matt.
“I know Matt. It was a shock to us all.”
“Lindz you can go now. I’ll be fine on my own.”
Lindz replied, “Are you sure hun?”
Matt nodded.
As Lindz got up and opened the door Matt called her.
“Lindz!”
“Yeah?”
“Er... it doesn’t matter. Go back to the others.”
And so Lindz did.

~*~*~*~*~

“How’s Matt?” Gianna asked.
“He’s taking it harder than I thought.” Replied Lindz.

After 2 days ..

Well they all sat down to watch some television, when Charlie switched it over to the teletext.

“Charlie why did you do that?” Oliver asked.
“Just checking the news.”
Charlie was looking at the headlines, when he yelled.
“What’s up?” Lindz asked.
Charlie replied, “They’ve found another body. It’s another female called Rebecca Hampson. Where have I heard that name before?”
Oliver said, “Charlie, Rebecca was Becca Hampson. Matt’s first love.”
“Man, Matt’ll take this hard.”
“We can’t tell him about Becca.” Said Lindz.
“But he needs to know.” Charlie replied.
Lindz shook her head ,
.
The phone rang " Hello" answered Oliver , " hi there Oli , it's Mark "
" oh hi Mark, how is things going on with you ?" Oliver asked.
" I'm fine , but I just saw the news , man I'm sorry is Matt ok ?" Gill asked.
" he claim that he is , but I don't think so , "Oliver said.
"I'm sorry man, I'll try to call him at his cell phone , hope he get better , say hi to everyone for me ok bye" Gill hanged up. " Mark ..Mark" Oliver said.
" I hope he don't tell Matt about Becca" he thought.

Nice update

waiting for part 3 unpatiently

me too

thank you , i'll put it soon

back , i'm going to put part 3 and 4 'cos s is not long at all ..

:part 3 of 11 :


Week after week Matt got better and he started going out for along time ..

“Guys this is just so weird.”
“Why Lindz?” Gianna asked.
“Have you noticed, that Becca and Karen were nice , why wed any one kill them?.”
Gianna got scared, “Do you think Matt had anything to do with the killings?”
Lindz replied, “Don’t be daft. Matt couldn’t hurt a fly if he tried.”
They laughed. Just then Matt walked into the living room with another girl.

“Hiya guys, this is Caroline. These are my mates Charlie, Oliver, Gianna and Lindz.”
They all said hiya and talked. They got on with each other so well.
So Caroline, have you known Matt long?” asked Oliver..
Caroline replied, “Please call me Carry and I’ve known Matt for about “
A 3 weeks now.”
Lindz smiled. She explained to Carry that Matt wasn’t having the best of times because of the murders and Carry understood. Lindz also told Carry that Matt wasn’t thinking straight and that he was confused and apparently Carry knew that too. Surely Carry doesn’t know everything? That was true; neither Carry or everyone else knows everything about Matt!

: part 4 from 11 :


A few months had passed and Matt and Caroline were still together. There had been no other murders but the police were still trying to find some information from people who knew the victims. They had nearly asked everyone who knew the victims apart from some people- Lindz, Charlie, Gianna, Oliver and Matt..

Lindz heard a knock on the door and went to open it. She was faced with two officers.

“Hiya I’m DC Gregory and this is DC Smith. We’ve believe you and some other people knew the victims and we were wondering if we could ask you some questions.”
Lindz was shocked but agreed and let them in.
Gianna and Charlie were playing Monopoly when the officers came.

“Guys this is DC Gregory and DC Smith. They’ve come to ask us some questions about the victims.” Lindz said.
Gianna and Charlie stopped what they were doing. Oliver had come downstairs after Lindz called him and so everyone sat down in the living room. Lindz asked the officers if they wanted a drink and they said yes so Lindz went to make them a brew and then sat back down.

“Right first of all, did you know any of the victims?” DC Gregory asked.
Gianna, Charlie, Lindz and Oliver all said yes.
“I only knew Becca.” Gianna said.
“That’s okay. How do you know these people?”
DC Smith was sat next to DC Gregory noting everything that was said.
“Well I knew them because they were Matt's girlfriends. .”
DC Gregory carried on, “And what is Matt’s full name?”
Charlie answered, “Matthew Louis.”
DC Gregory looked at DC Smith with a strange look.
“What was that look for officer?” Oliver asked.
“Well that name has cropped up in everyone’s answers especially from the victim’s families. Where is Mr. Louis now?”
They looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders.
“Well I thought he was upstairs.” Lindz said.
“No he isn’t. He went out somewhere about an hour ago with Caroline when you was on the computer in the study.” Answered Gianna.
“Who’s Caroline?” DC Gregory asked.
“Well Caroline is Matt’s girlfriend.” Oliver said.
“I see. How long have they been together?”
“About 3 months now. Why officer? Why is this relevant?” Gianna asked.
DC Gregory replied, “Well we’re only enquiring. Has Matt been acting very strangely recently?”
Everyone nodded.
“Well would you if you find out that your ex girlfriends have been found dead?” Charlie asked.
“Yes I would but the problem is that all the families and friends of the victims did say that the last time they saw the victims was when they went to see this Mr. Louis.”
Lindz gulped but was annoyed.
“Are you trying to say that Matt was involved in the murders officer?” Lindz asked.
“I’m not saying that.”
“It does sound like it to me. I will tell you now Matt couldn’t even hurt a fly so I don’t think he would have the guts to kill people sir.”
“That will be all.”
And the officers got up and Lindz opened the door to them. On their way out they asked Lindz to contact them when Matt arrived, as they wanted to speak to him soon. Then they went into the car and drove off. Lindz closed the front door behind her and went back into the living room.

“The cheeky bastards. Matt would never do that.”
Lindz was fuming about it.
“ They did say that Matt was the last person to see them alive.” Oliver said.
“They didn’t say that. They said that the families and friends knew the girls were going to see Matt but it doesn’t mean he was the last person they saw.” Replied Lindz.
Lindz then went upstairs to have a shower..

Gianna, Charlie and Oliver were still playing board games whilst Lindz had a shower.

After Lindz had a shower she was looking through the cabinet in the bathroom to find some pills she had been taking. She was on medication for her headaches and she felt one coming on. When she was searching through the medication she noticed a white box she had never seen before.

She took it out of the cabinet and looked at it. The name on the box was Matt’s. They had been prescribed to him and she was shocked when she saw the date on it. The date prescribed was May 13th 2003. He had been taking this medication for over 2 years and no one knew about it.

Lindz looked at the name of the medication and it was a very long and complicated name but because Lindz had done Health and Social Care, she had learned the names of the medication around and she quickly knew what the medication was for self Downcast . Why was Matt taking this medication? Surely he wasn’t chapfallen
? Lindz had to go downstairs and tell the guys. She now doubted what she said earlier. Weird thoughts crossed her head, but she got rid of it, Lindz went downstairs with the medication.

waiting for comments ^_^

no body liked the story or what ?

I love it Nikki really don't worry I just saw the last part
thnx for the update

ooh i see ,, thanx N.G

:part 5 from 11:

Gianna looked at Lindz.
“What’s wrong Lindz?”
Lindz looked at everyone.
“I think we need a chat with our Matt.”
“Why is that?” Charlie asked.
“Did anyone know that he was ill?”
Everyone shook their heads.
“Why Lindz?”
Well I found some medication in the cabinet for Matt. It was prescribed in 2003"she said..”
“What is the medication for?” Oliver asked worried.
“self downcast.” Lindz said.
“What? Ney Matt isn’t that!” Charlie said thinking to himself.
“Well why would he have them Charlie? .”
““2003? Isn't that when Gill was on jail, maybe it's something relative ?” Oliver asked
" no, it's when Dylan died remember, after six months we asked Matt to come and live with us.
"I don't understand what's self downcast?" Gianana asked.
"it's being chapfallen and joyless Gianna "Lindz answered
does that mean he is involved with murders” Gianna asked. .
“I had suddenly realized that there were some nights when Matt didn’t come in until late at night. Maybe he was doing something" LindZ said.."
Charlie said.“Lindz you psycho. Matt would never do that.”
“But it is strange though isn’t it?”
Gianna blushed with embarrassment?”
Gianna was being scared.
“What happens if he goes for us anytime soon?” Gianna asked scared.
Charlie hugged her.
Don’t be scared. .”
ith murders" Lindz asked I just want to know if Matt have to do w"
“I have a plan.” Charlie said.
“And what’s that bru?” Gianna asked.
“One of us can try and annoy him and see if he turns on us.”
“Bad plan Charlie. Besides, what can we annoy him with?” Oliver asked.
“We could asked him about the murders.”
“What Lindz?” Gianna scarily said.
Lindz explained, “I could go to him one day when he is in his bedroom and ask him about the medication and ask him was he involved in the murders. I’m his best mate, surely he can tell me everything.”
“But Lindz he didn’t tell you about his condition.” Oliver said.
“That is a point but I think I should do that.”
“But what happens if he goes after you ?” Gianna asked.
“Then I’ll scream and you come and help me.”
Lindz smiled but deep down she was dreading this plan. What if Matt truly tries to kill her? She has known Matt for a long time and she can’t believe she didn’t know about this.
“Are you sure about this though?” Charlie asked.
Lindz cringed but nodded at the same time.
“We now need to act normal. As though we don’t know about the medication.”
“I don’t know if I can do that Lindz.” Gianna said.
Lindz looked at her, “Please do this Gianna. For all our sake.”
Gianna nodded slightly and agreed. So Lindz went back upstairs ..
They then carried on playing board games