go on N.G.! I was off for a while but I will read it soon
Neketa- 03-23-2006
hey girls i know a word in spanish it's ' gracias ' maybe it well help lol waiting 4 the next chap
Nicks_Girl- 03-26-2006
"Gracias" its the only word I know by heart lol...I think everybody knows it lol....even my stupid sister does
Thanks girls
I'm finishing the next chapter today and promise to put it as soon as possible
Nicks_Girl- 03-31-2006
hey girls
sorry for being late and because of that I'll post chap 5 and 6
so here you go ________________________
Chapter 5 - How It Happened!!
The good thing was that this time my memory didn't betray me. I was able to remember the way back to the hotel. When I got in the room it was so empty . No life in it at all. They haven't got back here till now?! I thought. I dropped myself at the couch with a large sigh coming out of me. I stared at the TV for a long time. It was off so I was staring at a blank screen how miserble I am? I was hurt. Don't RUIN my life!! the way he said it hurts so much. with a huge sigh I covered my face and felt the tears rolling on my face. It hasn't been a whole day yet and its already hard. I wonder how all of this happened? I thought. could it be somebody who used some kinda of magic to get me here. wait I think its becoming clear now.
Flashback:
"Hey xtina imagine if we lived their life . do you think it would be hard? I mean their life seems hard no doubt about that but it must be amazing to be a celebrity" I said while I was on the phone with Xtina " who knows? sure its amazing to be surrounded by paparazzi and people running to you asking for autographs...hey why don't we form our own girl band?" Xtina said "yeah I doubt we would sell 8 copies in the first week...we can't even sing" I said "well talk about yourself I have a great voice" "owh just shut up...Do you want me to send you to American Idol and see if simon would say nice stuff about your voice" "ok I'd embarasse myself infront a record company but national TV and even international" "Thats the xtina I know" "owh don't you just wish to live their life?" xtina said with a sigh "yeah I wish it would be cool" " I think I know how..." her voice faded for a moment "what?" "nothing you'll know soon"
End of flash back.
XTINA!!! she was the one who did it....she used the help of some magicians or something for this I'm sure. She is so dead. I thought while I got up and reached for the phone to call her. ok I couldn't call her because I didn't know her number. so I called Shakira's company to get her number from there. I had to go through alot of people just to get her manager's number. At least I got a number
"Shakira's Manager" A woman answered "Hi can I speak to Shakira herself" I said trying to control my anger "Who's this?" "Nick Carter...I want to speak with her immediatly" "Ok hold on for a second"
"Hello what are you doing?" xtina said "what did I do?" I said with a cold tone "Antonio is here and he seemed uncomfrtable when he heard your name...I mean Nick's name" xtina whispered "I don't care...Listen I wanna ask you a question and I want an honest answer" "Go ahead" "Do you have anything to do with what are we going through...remember HONEST answer" Xtina was quite for a minute "what?" I said "well when we were talking the other day about being celebrities ..I had this old magic book which I really didn't believe in but I was going through a section of how to be another person so I was trying it for fun I SWEAR I didn't knew this was going to happen" "DUH book ..you read it...made what they told you to do..BAM we're here ...all of that you didn't knew this was going to happen" I tried to control my anger "Well I told you I didn't belive in those stuff I was 'yeah right like this would happen' and it did and to tell you the truth is scaring me" "tell me about it...now it must have some solution to get us back to our normal bodies" I said rolling my eyes "you have to call shakira...I mean yourself..whatever and you gotta tell her to go through the book to find a way" I completed Xtina was quite for a minute "what?" I said "Well after I read it...I ...I..." "OH MY GOD...YOU WHAT?" I shouted " I ...I threw...it away" Xtina stuttered "you WHAT?!" I shouted even louder " what the hell made you throw a book after taking something from it that needs to be gone back to for solution" " I thought this wasn't true so...I thought it was useless...and ...I don't know!" xtina shouted the last three words "OMG could you be any more stupid?" "yeah like you're the smart one?!" "at least I won't throw a Magic book that I recently used even though if I didn't believe in it...ugh" "stop yelling and think of what are we going to do" xtina suddenly calmed down "ooook and how is that by living in their bodies for the REST of our lives?" "don't freak out on me ok....just let us think..let me remember the name of the book...we'll try to find it" "oook and now we have to wait hours for you to remember the name...you don't even remember the name of the book you're weird" " Thanks ok...let me remember...it was something like...Magic life...yeah it was Magic of life" " and great where the hell are we going to find the book?" "We're in Spain idiot...we could find it ANYWHERE" xtina said " wait I think I know where to find it" xtina said with a tone of victory.
Nicks_Girl- 03-31-2006
Chapter 6 - I'm Sorry!
"OMG now is the harder part" I mumbled as I closed the cell phone thinking of how to apologize to Brian or I'd be toast soon. "Where the hell are they anyway" I mumbled again as I sat on the couch and switched the TV on. I kept going through the channels in anger for not finding a single English channel it was all 'bla bla bla bla' in Spanish. There was just the stupid CNN. GOD who would watch CNN while he's in vocation...oh Brian did this morning ugh. "S**t" I cursed and switched the TV off and threw the remote on the table.
As I threw my head back and closed my eyes I thought what the hell am I going to tell Brian that I am sorry...I got up and looked in the mirror "ok you be Brian and I will be me" I said to the me in the mirror. "ok" I said as if the mirror was speaking "Brian I am sorry about what I did earlier in the restaurant. I dont know what had gone through ALOT of anger or something" "and you spill that anger on me" I said as if it was the mirror "you were there ...but I am REALLY sorry" "NOT ACCEPTED" "but Brian I swear my mood was messed up and stuff I swear I didn't mean to hurt you...this is my bad I really sorry...." As I was speaking someone opened the door and it was the guys coming in "now you're talking to the mirror...whats wrong with you today?" AJ said " I was bored so I made an imaginary friend" I said with a big smile "why did we think that he changed ...HE DIDN'T" AJ said smacking me on the head "aww that hurts" I said smacking him on the head. I then looked at Brian he looked cool and didn't even have a feature on his face saying that he was angry. I went to him and said "Brian I...I'm..I'm really sorry I was in a messed up mood and I didn't..." "say no more Nick" he interrupted me with a smile and hugged me "its ok I understand" he said as he pulled away "Thanks...so where did you go...WITHOUT ME" I faked an angry look "Oh we went to some club FULL of girls...I mean ALOT.." Brian teased me "SHUT up..really did you have fun?" "of course we did ..you weren't there thats why" Howie said " you hate me don't you...and I can't let someone who hate me live" I jumped on his back and next thing I know I was sitting on his back while he laid helplessly on the ground "Oh....my...god...Nick...get off me...I LOVE YOU" "how could I be sure" " I will give you some chocolate and Kevin wouldn't even know....right Brian?" Howie said "ok" I said quickly and got up "anything for chocolate..now where is my chocolate?" I said as Howie got up He stared at me for a moment " I lied" he said and ran fast to his room and locked it up I couldn't catch him.
"wow ...he's ...fast" I said as I went to the living room. Brian chuckled while he read a book. "I'll get you tomorrow Howie.. I WILL" I yelled at him from the living room "Only if you woke up tomorrow I am making me knife ready ...you will be my dinner for tonight..and tomorrow..and the day after tomorrow...wow you could be my dinner for a year" I heard Howie yell from his room "oooh I'm scared" I said faking a scared look. I took a deep breath then my cell phone rang. I quickly after I recognized the number. " excuse me" I said as I got up and went to my room. I locked the door and answered the phone "Hello" I whispered "why are you whispering?" xtina said "they're here I don't want them to hear me" "ok I found some magic shops here but I couldn't go...I don't want to make this headline 'Shakira visits Magic shops' thats would be so embarrasing" "good thinking so what are we going to do?" "so I thought I could send somebody to look for the book for me" "but you don't know who to trust you know" "oh you're right that would be a big problem if he said I was the one who sent him" " Ugh Now what are we going to do?" " I have an idea I'll call Shakira and ask her who does she trust on stuff like this...you know serious stuff" "good thinking" I said and then the beeping telling me there was another line went on."ok you do that and I'll talk to you later Nick is calling bye" I said and quickly answered without even waiting for xtina to say something.
"hey" I said with a shaky tone "hey...umm so...ok..what did you do with Brian thing?" Nick asked concerned "don't worry" I let out a little sigh "Brian is sooooo sweet...you are one lucky person to have a friend like him...he said he understands and everything...we're cool now" I heard Nick sighing out of relief before saying "listen" he paused "I'm really sorry about what I said earlier to you...you know I was freaking out and-" "say no more...its totally ok" I interrupted "thanks ..hey you're so sweet too" Nick chuckled "and no body believes that" I said rolling my eyes Nick chuckled "why?" "because..." I paused "I don't usually act like a sweet girl...you don't wanna know a little of how I act most of the time" Nick laughed "and I was wondering why your family thought I was sick or something was wrong with me when I tried to act sweet and calm...I mean I thought that girls are like that...but...appearantly I was WRONG" "so I guess you know now how I act most of the time" "sure I'd be an anger storm from now on" he chuckled "oh I'm not THAT bad" "ok listen your mom would kill me ...she's so stricted about talking in the phone for so long may god help you when you're back...oooook gotta" he said "stop this gotta go tone from that stupid song" I heard my mom shouting and then Nick hung up
I sighed as I placed the phone on the table and threw myself on the bed "this is going to be harder than I thought it would be" I mumbled to myself as I closed my eyes and immediatly fell asleep it was one crazy day and a looooong one.
Neketa- 03-31-2006
thanx ng i'll read them and i'll be back , brb
911- 04-01-2006
aw girls, you are so good at English and I am not :( I cannot write stories in English and esp. not that good stories thanks Sarah go on
Nicks_Girl- 04-01-2006
Nikki
Take your time and enjoy
Luca
owh girl your English is great if you want to write stories try using the dictionary ...or take writing classes
I've learned how to write from some writing tips from some forums long time ago unfortunatly I forgot the url...once I find it I will send it to you
and thanks for your sweet comment I really appreciate it
Neketa- 04-05-2006
911 , me too i want to rwrite stories in english but i'm not good too , but i'm trying
NG sorry i finished it already but i wasn't online for 5 days so keep it going
Nicks_Girl- 04-10-2006
its ok Nikki
well I'm sorry for being late in updating but this the next 2 months are crowded with -*test*-('")s ...STUPID UNIVERSITY
I did start writing chapter 7 hopefully I will finish it this week