Full Version : ignore my broken heart
candybar >>Poetry, Stories >>ignore my broken heart


<< Prev | Next >>

Neketa- 03-16-2006
I want to break this glass
you're in the other side your mouth is moving but i can't hear you
i want to help you
but i don't know how to make you get through

you're miming , and i'm crying
I wanna help you , i'm losing hope too

but now here they come to get me , i used to run to you
but what would i do now , i spelled out your name
I alway want to do what i can't, i said good bye

now you dispeared , i looked around me
i see your face every where
but you're away far from me

please ignore my broken heart , you never had a problem doing that
please leave me alone , i may get over it soon

but till then i want to cry alone

ema- 03-16-2006
Awww Neketa-that is very nice and very sad-it's like you have read my mind and put in this poem all my feelings!!!

Candy- 03-16-2006
very sensitive....thank you NIkI

911- 03-16-2006
aw Neki, did you write this??
it is so good candybar/afro.gif
and sad candybar/sad5.gif

Neketa- 03-17-2006
thanks girls you're giving me encouragement to write more ,,

Nicks_Girl- 03-26-2006
aww that is so sad

great song hun keep it going

Neketa- 03-26-2006
thanx for posting your opinion NG
candybar/wink.gif

911- 04-01-2006
QUOTE (Neketa @ March 17, 2006 10:46 am)
thanks girls you're giving me encouragement to write more ,,

write more candybar/nod.gif
where do you find inpiration for poems like this?? candybar/question.gif

candybar/covereyes.gif I have no inspiration these days ... candybar/covereyes.gif
That´s wierd.... I used to write some poems in Czech but I don´t more ... I wonder what happened with me candybar/question.gif
I am just weird last months ...

It is so beautiful day here today... but still no inspiration
"I found my inspiration
Hidin' in your expression " candybar/wink.gif candybar/wink.gif

Neketa- 04-27-2006
i didn't wrote anything for a month ,
i have no time and no inspiration too ,

Free Forum Hosting by Forumer.comTM!