i dont know why did i wrote it but i feel that its the best poem i'v ever wrote ...
i want you guys to tell me if you like it

thick silence

Im sitten in a room
where fear is the air
hands shaken
and heart beats goes so fast

chocken with my own breath
face feels like it'll melt from crying

eyes search'n everywhere
wait'n for a sudden move
cuz been hurt be a close person
is like the fatal move

hearing my own breath
in this thick silince
doubts eating me from inside out
feeling my blood running in my vains
asking my self " what have i done "
to get treated this way
eyes closed
eyebrows going up to down
mouth gets wide open
try'v to catch a breath
chest feels so heavy
like carrying a bag of sand

Dont think ... that i'll ever forgive you
cuz what you have done to me cant be eraised

the only think i feel is
a deep wond throuw my heart & soul
feels like i'v been stapped by a sword

words run'n over & over
in my ears
whispers
screams ..

your voice ...

so

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Xty I love it soooo much I swear this is not just a compliment it is the best poem you've ever wrote really its sooo deep but tell me is it about the person I think its about?!

Hun this is so good keep up the good work

Yes!
it is great!

NICEEEEEE!!!!!! It looks like it would have been written by me-considering the atmosphere and the message!!!

aww thnx girls !!! .. ng .. its not about anyone ... so thnx girl for all of these comments !! you made my day !!

wooow , i like it it's so deep and thoughtfull and i love it ,
good job xtyy

thnx nikki ! i was waitting for your opinion

great peom, but i hate those feelings

yeah i hate them too .. told ya i dont know why did i wrote it