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Nicks_Girl- 12-27-2005
hehe Nikki I hated her too and I'm the one who made her that way hehe
and I'll be updating chapter 8 so soon

and luca its ok have fun reading

Neketa- 12-27-2005
take your time NG candybar/chat.gif , but make it long candybar/evil5.gif this time ok pleeeeeeeasssssssse candybar/inlove.gif

Nicks_Girl- 12-31-2005
here is your long chapter Nikki

chapter 8:


"Man how much I hate that girl?" shouted Ian hitting his desk while he was walking around his room thinking about what happened
"Is there somethign wrong sweetie" his mom said opening the door
"no" said Ian in anger
"then why you're angry?" she asked
"mom I said nothing is wrong just leave me alone for some time" Ian voice rised up
"If you don't wanna talk about it then.."
"Mom" Ian interrupted her in anger
"ok ok I'm out" said his mom

what should I do..should I call Mandy she won't answe ...Ian thougt ..he thought and thought and thought and thought but never came up with an idea or what he should do
"hello Mrs.Clarkson..Is Mandy there?" Ian said to Martha Mandy's mom
"why don't you call her in her cell phone?" said Martha complaining
"well I just wanna ask about her is she ok now"
"what the hell are you talking about nothing happened to her"
Jack heared Martha talking as he was coming downstaires
"is that Ian" Jack asked Martha
"yeah he wants Mandy"
"give me the phone" said Jack as he took the phone from Martha
Martha rolled her eyes and walked away...Jack waited for her to go and then answered Ian
"what the hell are you doing to my sister" whispered Jack so nobody could hear him
"why are you whispering?" Ian said
"Mandy doesn't want anyone to know about it anyway don't try to get out of it what have you done to her"
"Nothing I swear she was blowing at me all at once and she was saying a lot of reasons" Ian explained
"well get out of her way these days you listen gotta go" said Jack when he noticed Mandy coming down
"but I'm not done talking.."
"bye" interrupted Jack and hung up

"who was that" Mandy said yawning
"one of my friends" Jack said
" as I know you have ONLY one friend who is Mark"
"oh that was Mark" said Jack as he tried to get away with it "so are you ok now"
"Jack I appreciate what have you done with Ian but I can deal with my own peoblems" said Mandy with a warm smile
"what..I mean what are you talking about?"
"oh don't act like you don't know about it...I was listening to you from the other line
"uh you got me ..well I thought I could.."
"its ok you don't have to explain" said Mandy interrupting Jack and smiled

"umm hi Natasha listen I'm not one of those girls who want to be your friend just because you're a cheerleader cap.."Claire said to Natasha in the gym
"save it what do you want ??!!" Natasha interrupted her
"umm you hate Mandy right"
"oh I see where is this going a friend trying to make her friends life better by.."
"no we're not friends anymore thats why I want to team up with you to do something for her that make her regret what she did"
"cool I've always wanted to do that" Natasha said with an evil smile

Ian could feel something was going on with Claire and Natasha as their laughing got louder and he was smart enough to know that they were up to something to Mandy "oh my god" said Ian and rushed out of the Gym

"Jack" Tony said while Jack was going to his room
"what now??!!" said Jack rolling his eyes as he walked to Tony
"umm I really don't want to do this but something tells me I should" Tony said with a sad face
"what is it" Jack asked concerened
"Its about you and Mandy" mumbled Tony
"Tony you're scaring me what is it"
"I was looking through dad's papers" said Tony putting his hand in his pocket "and I found this" said Tony as he pulled a paper out of his pocket and handed it to Jack
Jack took the paper nervously and opened it..he looked at it for a moment "OMG ..no way" said Jack in a shock

Mandy took off her head phones as soon as she heared her brothers yelling and rushed to them

"you can't tell her" shouted Tony as he grabbed Jack trying to stop
"yeah right and why?" said Jack in anger
" because she's already miserble and you don't wanna add something miserble to her life now do you Jack?" Said Tony giving Jack the look thats says "do you really want to do this"
Jack was silent for a second "ok but she gotta know"
"whats going on?" asked Mandy as she came running down the staires
"Nothing" said Jack hiding the paper behind him
Mandy could notice Jack hiding the paper "whats that paper Jack??!"
"uh umm its my ..my .my school report" said Jack looking confused "I got an F" whispered Jack "you're not telling anyone are you?"
"nah you can trust me but why were you two fighting"
"umm he wanted to tell mom" Jack said pointing at Tony who was completely in another world "right Tony?" said Jack waving his hands infront of Tony's face
"yeah right "
"although I feel like you're lying to me but I blieve you" said Mandy with a smile and went back to her room

"wow that was close" Tony said
Jack sighed as he sat on the chair thinking of what he just read "I just didn't see that coming"


end of chap 8
and sorry for being late

Nicks_Girl- 12-31-2005
and for being late here is chapter 9 instead

"Mandy please pick up the phone I really need to talk to you" said Ian to Mandy's answering machine "c'mon I know you're in there...fine ok bye"
Mandy stared at her phone while she was sitting on her bed wondering what Ian wanted...he sounded like he had something important ...she thought.."NO i'm not calling him back" said Mandy as she got off the bed heading to her desk to do her homeworks...she stopped and looked back at her phone "one last phone call" said Mandy picking the phone up
as soon as the phone rang Mandy began thinking what if Ian was really angry at me now what if I messed up everything what if he fought with me..her heart beats were rising with every ring
"Hello" Ian answered
Mandy hung up and closed her eyes and dropped her self on the floor as her tears dropped from her eyes too
"stupid Mandy stupid stupid stupid" said Mandy hitting her head on the ground

"thats a great Idea" Claire said as she was looking at Natasha while she worked on the computer
"thanks we're gonna make Mandy regeret it so bad" Natasha said with an evil smile as she was working on the computer
"wow I should have been your friend a long time ago instead of this boyfriends theif" said Claire complaining
"after we do this to her she's gonna quit stealing boyfriends" said Natasha and laughed
"are you sure this is going to work" Claire asked concerened
"she's not my first victim Claire so I'm sure this will work perfectly" said Natasha with a full of hate look
"that looks real" laughed Claire while Natasha showed her her work

"Mandy why did you hang up on me" Ian said to her answering machine "I Know you're in there I just want to tell you.."
"hello" said Mandy picking the phone up
"oh Mandy you don't know how happy I am to.."
"what do you want?" Mandy said interrupting Ian
" I want you"
"No you want your football dream" said Mandy with a sad voice
"but I want you more" Ian whined
"then why don't you let everyone know"
"but..Mandy thats my biggest dream in life"
"then call me after a month when you're allowed to date" said Mandy in anger and hung up

Mandy was noticing people at school staring at her and whispering she looked down to check her clothes nothing was wrong with them ..she took out a small miror and looked at her self perfect as always
"you wanna why people are staring at you" Amanda shouted pushing Mandy and dropping her on the floor
"whats going on?" said Mandy as she stood up
"don't act innocent young girl I know everything" said Amanda in anger
"I swear I don't know what this is all about?"
"fine you wanna know" said Amanda as she took out a picture of her school bag and put it infront of Mandy's face "now do you know what I'm talking about"
"thats not me" said Mandy as she saw a picture of her self kissing amanda's boyfriend Mike
"then who's that ME??" shouted Amanda
"thats not real somebody made that" Mandy shouted
"hey hey hey like I'm gonna believe that listen to me..."
"you listen to me thats not me believe it or not I don't care" shouted Mandy and walked away
"come here" shouted Amanda as she grabbed Mandy's arm
"awwww you little ..." shouted Mandy as she pushed Amanda away
"looks like a fight to me" shouted Amanda as she got up and hited Mandy
Mandy now was soooo angry that she wanted to kill somebody ..she jumped on Amanda and started hitting her ..people were just looking like they were enjoying a show

"Mandy are you ok?" Mandy could hear someones voice as she opened her eyes
"aww...dad what are you doing at school" said Mandy
"you're not in school you're in the hospital"
"HOSPITAL why?" Mandy shouted
"calm down because of the fight we'll talk about that later"
"aww yeah that bitch I wish shes in hospital too" said Mandy in pain
"she is and honey its not nice to call other people bitches"
"but dad she is"
"what happened??"
Mandy sighed and began telling the whole story to her dad


end of chap 9

911- 12-31-2005
It looks great.... I will work on it candybar/nod.gif candybar/nod.gif candybar/nod.gif candybar/nod.gif
Thanks!

Nicks_Girl- 12-31-2005
ur welcome

take ur time and tell me what do u think after finishing it

Neketa- 01-03-2006
they're long yay
i'll read 8 and 9 , brb

Nicks_Girl- 01-03-2006
take ur time hope u like them

Neketa- 01-04-2006
finished ,
i liked it when they fight , so much fun ,
next chap please candybar/evil5.gif

Nicks_Girl- 01-04-2006
LOL Nikki we're girls right we must like fights hehe

here is chapter 10

Jack was In Mandy's room looking for his lost PSP so he could play with it in the hospital when Mandy sleeps
"umm hi Mandy I'm sorry about what happened last night and..uh" Ian said when the answering machine started
"what she called him??" said Jack to his self
"and please call me back" Ian continued
"hello" Jack picked up the phone
Ian had already hung up "oh damn it" Jack whispered and got out of Mandy's room
"hey Mandy this is me again..just wanted to tell you AGAIN that you're more important to me than football" Ian said when he alled again feeling that he wanted to say something..or maybe its because he realized he that he dialed Mandy's number by mistake and he found his self forced to say something when he found out he actually called Mandy when her answering machine started to roll "umm and.."
"hello" Jack picked up the phone when he heared Mandy's machine he rushed to pick it up
"umm who are you??!!" said Ian surprised
"its Jack what do u want from Mandy I believe I told you not to call her at least not this time" said Jack in anger
"relax she's not anwering my calls so how can I talk to her I just wanted to check on her thats all"
"well she's not here anyway" said Jack
"where is she??!!" asked Ian
"in the hospital"
"what ..what happened??!!" said Ian concerened
"relax she only got a broken hand and one black eye thats all nothing serious"
"what happened who hit her?"
"she had a fight with a girl called Amanda"
"Mandy and a fight thats so not Mandy listen I'll come pick you up and you go with me ok"
"what don't you inderstand she doesn't want you dude get over it"
"I can make her forgive me just come with me"
"oh ok" said Jack as he rolled his eyes and hung up

"awsome you're a genius Natasha" Claire said in excitement
Natasha was walking around her room thinking ..she turned at Claire and said
"still more to come Claire" said Natasha smiling as she was thinking of a new plan
"wow I just can't wait for it you're the best"
" I told you she's gonna regret it so bad that she'll want to die more than anything
"did you see Amanda's face when she saw it ...wait why did you choose amanda for it" Claire said
"because Mike is my ex-boyfriend and he dumped me for her so I thought its payback time..he'll now suffer to get her back"
"oh I said it once and I'm gonna say it again ur a big genius Natasha" said Claire and laughed
"thank you ..thank you very much" said Natasha while she was laughing

end of chap 10

Nicks_Girl- 01-04-2006
wait thats not long

here is chapter 11 then

"hiiii" said Jack as he walked in Mandy's room in the hospital
it was only Mandy in the room while her dad had to leave
"hi Jack" Mandy said with a big smile
"hi Mandy" Ian said following Jack
Mandy was now upset "we need to talk" Ian said with a real sad look on his face
"guys I'm gonna leave u two alone" Jack said as e walked out of the room
Mandy was quite and not looking in Ian's way..Ian stood infront of her bed watching and knowing that she was totally ignoring him Ian cleared his throat "I'm sorry" said Ian
Mandy was still ignoring him "l've been kicked out of the team for you" Ian said as he sat on the chaire next to her
"are you crazy??" said Mandy
"I thought thats what u wanted?" Ian said as he looked up at her
"no I didn't want you to be kicked out of the team"
"you said you want to let everyone know about our relationsip and the first step is to tell the coach and he kicked me out"
"I never wanted to be this way" Mandy said with an embarrased face
"don't worry there are plenty of sport clubs that teach football I can join I'll just have to go through names to pick up one to join" said Ian with a warm smile
Mandy looked up at Ian and smiled "I'm sorry"
"don't mention it" said Ian and hugged Mandy

"Martha where the hell is Jack and Mandy's Birth cetificate" Bob shouted as he looked through his papers
"how should I know its probably in this pile of papers" said Martha
" I can't find it" said Bob freaking out
"WHAT...well you have too you can't lose such papers they're important" shouted Martha
"there I found it" said Bob as he sighed out of relief
"oh my god I was gonig to pass out "
"I should hide this one in a very private place" said Bob looking around "got it I'll put it with my work papers in my private locker"
"great idea cuz if you lost again that would be a big trouble" said Martha rolling her eyes

"so you two are cool now" said Jack when he went back
"yeah we are" said Mandy with a smile
" well I think I have to go right now" said Ian as he stood up and kissed Mandy on the cheek "see ya later"
"bye" said Mandy to Ian as he walked out of the room
"Jack didn't mom come to visit me??!! or maybe check on me?" Mandy asked
Jack was confused now he wasn't sure what to tell her ..he was trying to pretend like he didn't hear what she said but thats not gonna work because he's the only one who was in the room "I don't know maybe she'll come around later" said Jack
"I doubt" said Mandy as she droped her head down
"Dad was here" said Jack trying to make her feel better
"I know I was awake when he was here"
"umm Mandy there is something I want to tell you" said Jack
"what?!" asked Mandy concerned
"I'm going to study abroad" Jack answered
"what where when?"
"umm to London ..next week"
"thats too far and ur gonna leave me here all alone"
"I'd call you everytime I get the chance to"
Mandy didn't feel like asking more about it ..she was just too sad and maybe too shocked to ask him all about it..now Jack is going to a very far place and she considered him as the person who she always run too he was the perfect brother to her and now she's only gonna talk to him by phone or maybe on the internet..that was just too hard for her to accept
"don't be sad Mandy you still got Tony" said Jack
"TONY!!! you've gotta be kidding me ..he even doesn't care about himself and now you expect him to take care of me no Jack I don't believe Tony would be just ok" said Mandy in anger
"relax why are you so mad"
"cause I'll lose a perfect brother in a certain time" said Mandy and cried

end of chap 11

xtina- 01-04-2006

i'v saved them all .. im going to read them tonight candybar/nod.gif ... thnxxxx

Neketa- 01-04-2006
thank you NG candybar/celebrate.gif
brb

Nicks_Girl- 01-07-2006
take ur time xtina

and ur welcome Nikki

Neketa- 01-08-2006
i finished it , candybar/evil5.gif next please

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