hey girls this is A story i'm writing at the moment
CHAPTER ONE:
I don't want to hear another word from you just go to your room" Mandy's mom said yelling at mandy
"but I swear I didn't do it ...Jessica did" Mandy tried to defend herself after he mother accused her of breaking her favorite set of tea cups
"yeah yeah right it's always Jessica mom I swear she did it" Jessica said
Mandy ran to her room crying because she was innocent and that she was hurt ..it's not the first time that her mother did that to her ..actually she would always believe Jessica and blame Mandy ...Tony Mandy's twin brother just stood there watching her doing nothing just enjoying the fight like always or probably was looking in their direction but thinking about Girls like always ..
Knock Knock Knock somebody knocked Mandy's door
"Come in" Mandy said whiping her tears
" there's no need to whipe your tears sis I know you were crying" Jack her other twin brother said ...they actually were a triple
"it's ok nothing so big a fight with mom like always" Mandy said catching her breath
"well it's not worth it I heared everything from my room and when I came down you weren't there I know it was Jessica who did I believe you so just take it easy beside mom always blames you ..you should be used o it right" Jack smiled
"yeah" Mandy smiled back
"so are you ok now??"
"yeah i'm better thanks"
"no need to thank me"
Claire as always was sleeping when her phone rang "Hello" Claire answered
"hi Claire it's me Mandy" Mandy said
"I know there's no one else who wake me up other than you" Claire yawned
"oh sorry did I wake you up AGAIN?"
"It's ok"
"Listen Claire I need to talk to you can you meet me in starbucks?"
"hmmm" Claire thought was she really in the mood for going out NO she of course was in the mood to sleep "ok i'll meet you there" shecouldn't let her bestfriend down
"cool i'll see ya there bye" Mandy hung up
Claire had put her phone on the bed "ahhhhh" she yawned "oh Mandy" she stuttered . She got up to change her clothes
"Dad I need some money can you please give me some" Mandy begged
"how much do you need??"
"anything you decide I'm going to starbucks then i'll go shopping and you know"
"ok here would1000 $ would be enough?"
"sure I love you dad"
Mandy lived in Beverly Hills and was born rich so does her friends
"hey" Mandy greeted Claire
"Hiiii" said Claire looking tired
"Claire when will you ever be fully awake??!!"
" I don't know maybe one day who knows" Claire said and put her head on the table on order to sleep
"ok i'll order two coffee or maybe i'll just order coffee for my self and order espperesso for you cuz you really need that to wake you up"
Claire jumped up " no i'm totally awake just don't bring that thing called espperesso" Claire always hated espperesso cuz she hates to stay awake " a coffee is better it won't make stay awake for a long time like espperesso"
Mandy laughed "I'm not that evil to turture you and let you be awake for so long"
"so what do you needed to talk about" Claire asked
"umm" Mandy looked sad "it's mom she's making my life hareder everyday..she always blames me for stuff I didn't do..."
Mandy's voice started to fade slowly as Claire closed her eyes and almost fell asleeep
"HELLO" Mandy waved at Claire's face
"oh sorry i'm really sorry I was awake all night yesterday"
"forget it do you want to go shopping with me"
"ummm"
Mandy sighed "I know you're sleepy go home it's ok i guess i'll shop alone"
"really I love you girl" Claire went to her home as fast as she can
" I can't believe how she loves sleeping more than anything" Mandy said to her self and smiled
chapter two is on the way
i was so bored these days , that even read a book , talk to myself , do boring stuff .
but thank god you put this topic .
i'll read it and comment back
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oh glad I helped you
here is chapter 2
"hey i'm back is anybody home?" Mandy shouted " I guess not like always" Mandy stuttered
"Hey Mandy I'm the only one who's here" Jack said coming down the staires
"Great" Mandy said looking for something on one of the shopping bags "here I found it" Mandy pulled a box out of it and hand it to Jack
"Sony PSP how cool how did you know that I want that" Jack said happily
"since i was going to the mall I sneaked into your room while you were sleeping and read your "to buy list" and PSP was on top of the list" Mandy smiled
"OMG I love you now I don't have to beg dad for money to buy it thanks"
"hey no problem" Mandy looked around the house "where's mom?" Mandy asked
" she went to buy a new set of chinese dishes or tea cups or whatever" said Jack while he was reading the instruction for PSP
"and Jessica?"
"I don't know maybe she went out with her friend to the mall or something"
"AGAIN beside she should be home by 11 or if dad came and he didn't find her he will kill her" Mandy picked up her phone to call Jessica
"hey" Jessica came in and went straight "to her room
"ugh the same routine she comes in says HEY and goes to her room and never thinks of me unless she wants to blame me for something she did and mom of course would believe that" Mandy complained
"we have to get used to it remember mom have two sons and two daughters and she only cares about one son and one daughter ugh and that son isn't me for sure it's always about "TONY" ugh " Jack said playing with his PSP "did you know that PSP plays MP3 cool" Jack said
"yeah I did" Mandy looked sad and went to her room carrying her shopping bags
Mandy threw her shopping bags on the the floor like always and threw her self on the bed ..she began thinking in what Jack said about his mother caring about one daughter which is of course Jessica ..for a moment it seemed true for Mandy "But a mother can't hate her own daughter no matter what" she thought "then why she treats me like that" it always confused her
"miss Claire you're gonna be late for school" the house keeper tried to wake Claire up
"I don't wanna go to schooooool" Claire whined
"but Mrs.newman insists that you go to school today"
"oh MOMS ok ok i'm getting up is the shower ready?"
"yes miss Claire"
Claire went with closed eyes to the bathroom she banged her head on the door " awww...sh*t" complained claire and she opened her eyes she found a note on the door "don't say the word sh*t again and don't sleep in the bath tub ok honey..yours, mommy"
"I swear she's either a sickek or she has cameras all over the place" Claire stuttered
Claire was a really a good example of a very lazy girl although she had the most perfect body in school which every girl envied her for. The reason for that is that her mother would never let her eat junk food or unhealthy food.
"hey Claire" Mandy waved at Claire
"hey" Claire sounded tired "what's the time now when will we be home"
"we haven't started class yet and you're asking about when to leave c'mon" Mandy laughed
Mandy held Claire's hand so she won't bump into somebody..suddenly Mandy stopped
"what's wrong mandy why did you stop just get me in class as fast as you can I just wanna sit"
Mandy didn't answer ...she was too busy watching her crush "Ben" as he passed
"HELLO" Claire waved
"oh sorry Ben had just passed me" Mandy said turning to Claire
"I know nothing like Ben can stop you and make you stare and drool like that" said Claire rolling her eyes
"did I drool??" Mandy asked concerened
Carie sighed "NOOO ... I was kidding just let's go to class or we'll be late and I defenitly don't need detention c'mon"
end of chapter 2
three is on the way
CHAPTER THREE
"but you're obviously treat them like you hate them we gotta tell them" Bob ..Mandy's dad said to her mom
"no we're not do you want to destroy everything we have" Martha..Mandy's mom shouted
"then stop treating them like that" Bob shouted back
"treating them like what?" Martha rolled her eyes
"hey they are not kids anymore they are 18 now they understand if you really like them or not"
"how can you know huh"
"Dad what's going on" Jack said closing the door behind him after he came from school
"nothing" Bob said
"dad i can hear you two shouting from outside"
"look your dad said that there's nothing SO there isn't a thing going on..just go to your room"
"fine I was going there anyway"
"that's what I was talking about if Jack was Tony you would be like honey go to your room Martha go easy on them"
Martha sighed and grabbed the newspaper and started to ignore Bob
"ugh you're always like that..I better take a nap" Bob said going upstairs
Mandy came in
"hey mom" Mandy said
Martha didn't say a word and totally ignored Mandy . Mandy sighed and shook her head then went to her room
"hey Mandy come here" Jack whispered sticking his head out of his room
"what now?" Mandy shook her head and smiled
"what is it?" Mandy said closing the door behind her
"Mom and dad were fighting when I got here"
"so what they're always fighting what's new in that?"
"but this time dad was sooo angry more than you can imagine and I swear I could her dad saying they are 18 now they understand if you really like them or not to mom and i've got a feeling that he means us"
Mandy kept quiet for a moment and had a pretty sad face "you think mom hates us?!" looking at Jack with sad eyes
"well they say moms would hate anything but they would never hate their kids but for now it doesn't seem like that with mom who am i kidding it never seemed true with mom"
"if that's true then why there is so many mothers who kill their kids" said mandy facing down
"you got a point on that...Imagine mom killing us" Jack said joking while he was working on the computer
"noo she don't hate us that much" Mandy laughed
mandy was silent for a moment again and her eyed sparkeled filled with tears
"you may be right haha" said Jack turning at Mandy "OMG Mandy don't cry" Jack sat next to her trying to make her feel better
"but how mom treats me and how she treats Jessica kills me I feel that she likes Jessica more than me" Mandy cried
"it's ok Mandy even though mom doesn't treat us right we still got dad I swear he loves more than anything"
"yeah I guess so and that what is making me go through life until now" Mandy said whiping her tears
"Jack dad wants you downstaires" Jessica said opening the door " well you're having some kind of meeting and you're not telling me ..hmm why do I care it's probably geeks meeting huh"
"JESSICA" Jack shouted and wanted to hit Jessica
"Jack no she's just a kid" Mandy held his hand trying to stop him
"who's the kid? GEEK" Jessica said
"Jessica you gotta respect us at least because we're older than you" Jack said
"huh and who said that whatever later GEEKS" Jessica said running to her room
"uh I must tell mom about her behaviour" Jack said angery
"umm Jack HELLO thats mom you're talking about she won't do a thing to her remember" Mandy said rolling her eyes
end of chapter three
Chapter 4 please

I am curious to know how it goes on... :)
I'll be glad to put chapter 4 luca
CHAPTER FOUR
"you've got to stop being lazy young girl or..." Claire's mom shouted
"or what ... that's how I always been and how I'll always be" Claire shouted back
"thats not how the life works Claire you've got to work"
"what work why I've got the money huh"
"we're not gonna last for you honey listen to me you won't even find someone to love or get married if you ever stayed this way"
"huh who needs love" Claire said on her way to her room
" everyone needs love and you can deny it right now but days will show you how important love is"
"yeah yeah yeah the same talk again well I'll wait for the days to show me then" Claire said walking to her room
Claire had always hated romantic movies and she would always say "yeah right thats just movies there is no such love..whats the use of Love anyway" she never believed in Love and decided never to but for a moment she threw herself on her bed thinking of what her mom said about how important love is so she decided to try "there is no harm in trying" she said to herself and called Mandy
"oh Claire you're calling me that means you're not asleep WEIRD" Mandy answered
"weird things happen listen I've made a big decisison"Claire said
"what!!" Mandy said excited
"I'll hook up with someone"
"who?!" Mandy sounded exteremly happy
"I don't know anyone I just wanna experience this you know for fun"
"ugh I thought you were serious for a moment ..but Claire what if in the end you really liked him?"
"umm I don't think this is gonna happen cause this guy is so not my type"
"so you have one in mind"
"he just crossed my mind" Claire smiled
"who is he?" Mandy said excited
"Ian"
"WHAT??!!...you mean Ian the captin of our football team" Mandy said shocked
"Uh-huh thats the one"
"UH...um.no I mean no way on earth he's gonna even look on our way claire now you want him to be your boyfriend forget it look for someone else"
" No I want him and you'll see" Claire said confident
Claire sat on her bed and started thinking how to get Ian to be her boyfriend..she took a notebook and a pen and laid on the bed then she started writing a plan
"Claire" her mom knocked the door
"yes" Claire answered
"can I come in?"
"sure" said claire opening the door
"you still like Britney Spears I thought you stopped caring about her long time ago" Claire's mom said looking at Britney's posters all over Claire's bedroom walls
Claire rolled her eyes "mom what do you want?" Claire sighed
"umm i just wanna say that I'm sorry"
"for what?!" Claire asked concerned
"about the argue we had downstaires" her mom explained
"oh mom that was nothing it's ok I didn't get mad or anything" Claire said dropping her opened nailpolish on the floor "oh shit"
"you gotta stop using that word honey" Claire's mom said
"what word" Claire said picking it up
"I can't say it"
"oh mom oh no here it comes again"
Mandy woke up on her alarm clock and it happened to be Sunday and she was in a really bad mood
"good morning sleeping beauty you finally woke up" Jack said joking as Mandy came down the stairs
"shut up" said Mandy annoyed
" looks like someone is in a real bad mood today" Jack said
"ugh" Mandy said as she grabbed a chair in the kitchen and sat on it waiting for her breakfast to be heated for her
"what is it you can always tell me u know that Mandy" Jack said sitting on the chair infront of her
Mandy had put her head on the table and closed her eyes "I don't wanna talk about it"
"fine but when u feel like saying it just remember I'm here" Jack said as he sipped his coffee
"Good morning geeks" Jessica said opening the refrigerator
Jack looked furiously at Jessica but he knew he couldn't do a thing to the spoiled daughter otherwise he'll get in trouble like he always did
Mandy stoop up being very angry and grabbed Jack "you know what I feel like talking about it now lets go somewhere else" Mandy said
Mandy sat on her bed as Jack sat on the sofa
"so what is it?" Jack said
"umm I'm afraid u won't understand because this is kinda a girls problem"
"there's no harm in hearing it" Jack smiled
"ok yesterday Claire said she wants to get a boyfriend" Mandy said and was silent for a moment
"whats wrong with that??"
"let me finish..the boy she wants as her boyfriend is actually my boyfriend"
"what ...what a mean friend"
"she doesn't know about it" Mandy interrupted Jack
"why didn't you tell her"
end of chap 4
ohh sorry for being late i'll read chapter 2 , 3 and 4
brb ,,
take your time
Chapter 5 is on the way
i finished the last chapters ,
i'll wait for the next one
and here is the 5th and the 6th
Chapter 5:
"Hi Mandy you're not gonna believe this I thought a little what about I'm going to do and I found out that I really like Ian and I want to have a serious relationship with him" Claire said excited
Mandy sighed and took a deep breath "uh umm well good luck"
"You don't sound ok are you sick?"
"Umm yeah actually I am that’s why I have to leave now to get some sleep" Mandy said with her tears trapped in her eyes
"Oh ok then bye"
Mandy hung up the phone and started crying wondering why it has to be her best friend who likes her boyfriend without knowing that he is
Mandy picked up the phone and called Ian
"Hello this is Ian probably I can't answer your phone call right now please leave a message"
Beep it was the sign for Mandy to begin leaving her message but Mandy was silent for a minute
"Pick up the phone I know you're in there and you're probably sleeping" Shouted Mandy while she was crying
Ian jumped off his bed and picked up the phone
"What’s wrong Mandy?" asked Ian concerned
"You"
"What about me??"
"We have to tell everybody about us" Mandy whined
"But you know I'll be kicked out of the team if the coach knew that I was seeing somebody"
"What does he have to do with you dating or not"
"He said if we didn't date for a month we'll probably have more attention to practice and blah blah blah"
"But this is being serious I mean I don't know where to start I don't want you to be kicked out of the team but.."
"But what"
"Claire likes you and she wants you as her boyfriend and she doesn't know about us"
Ian closed his eyes and sighed "OMG that’s so complicated"
"Ian please lets just let everyone know"
"But the team.."
"What is more important me or the team?" Mandy shouted
"Uh I don't know"
Mandy was angry by now so she hung up the phone and cried like a baby
"Hi Ian" Claire waved at Ian running to him
"Umm hi" said Ian while he was looking around for Mandy
"Looking for something?"
Ian could notice Mandy arriving to school
"Hey Mandy wait" said Ian running to Mandy
"What the.." Claire said
"I'm sorry Mandy I didn't mean it" Ian begged
"I have a class now" said Mandy rushing to her class
Claire was watching from far away
"What were you telling Mandy?" Claire said coming to Ian
"Nothing I was just asking her about the Math homework we're in the same class" said Ian and walked away
Claire had this look that she knew something was going on between Ian and Mandy "she'll never get away with it" Claire said and walked to her class
end of chapter 5
how do u like it so far neketa ?!
and here is chapter 6
Mandy was thinking about the whole thing in class what she was going to tell Claire if she knew and would she do
"Mandy are you still with us" the English teacher said
"Oh sorry yeah" Mandy said
"anyway the bell is about to ring any minute now don't forget your home works on Monday"
The bell rang and Mandy rushed out
Mandy was facing down walking slowly not knowing where to go it was lunch break but she didn't want to the cafetiria
"where are you going Juliet" said Claire blocking Mandy's way by putting her hand on the wall
"hey Claire where have you been this morning and why are you callng me Juliet"
"I've been watching you and Ian I guess you know now why I'm calling you Juliet"Claire said in anger
"well Claire let me.."
"shut up" Claire interrupted "just when I thought you're the one I can trust" Claire said and walked away
"Claire wait" Mandy shouted
"save it" Claire said
Mandy fell on the floor because of her shock suddenly everything began to fade and voices began to fade too
Ian was on his way to the football practice the halls were so quite and everyone was either in the cafeteria or outside.As Ian walked to the gym he could notice Mandy laying on the floor
"OMG! whos that?" Ian said rushing to her
"oh my ..Mandy" Ian said
Ian carried Mandy and rushed to the school nurse
"she was tired and stressed and probably she didn't have something for breakfast she'll be awake in about a half an hour or less" the nurse explained to Ian
"oh thank god ok just keep her here and keep an eye on her I have practice gotta go"
"sure thats my job"
Mandy opened her eyes and stood up and took her things
"oh I see you're up" the nurse said coming from the bathroom
"yeah I guess who brought me here?! what happened?!" Mandy said shaking her head
"Ian"
"oh my god" Mandy sighed "thanks anyway"
"no problem"
Mandy walked to the gym to see Ian..she was there infront of the door...everything that happened glanced infront of her she was afraid of something she didn't even knew so she took a step back and began to walk away
i like it ,
i'll just read chapter 5 and 6 , and i'll be back and keep them going
thanks glad u like it
the here is chapter 7 for you after reading 5 and 6
CHAPTER 7:-
"Mandy" Ian shouted as he opened the door and ran to her
Mandy stopped trying to stop her tears from falling "what?" said Mandy giving Ian her back
"won't you at least look at me" Ian whined
"you were the reason of why I lost my best friend" Mandy shouted as she turned at him
"how am I suppose to know that she liked me" Ian shouted back
"this wouldn't be happening if you didn't keep this as a secret like we were doing something wrong"
"It wasn't my choice I just can't give up a dream for a ..." Ian stopped
"say it a girl...so I was just a girl passing by in your life" Mandy's voice was lower
"no you wasn't..listen"
"I Don't wanna listen leave me alone please" said Mandy and rushed out of school crying
Claire was watching everything with a real big victory smile
"Its ok Ian she's just a girl" said Claire putting her hands on Ian shoulders.Ian took her hands off him and looked at her furiously and walked away
"thats ok you'll be crawling to me one day baby" Claire smiled
Mandy entered her home crying and ran to her room .Jack saw her and followed her.As soon as Mandy was in her room she locked the door and threw her self on the bed
"Mandy open the door please" said Jack knocking on Mandy's door
Mandy didn't answer and Jack could hear her cry "fine if u feel like talking about it I'll be in my room" said Jack and walked away
"Jack" said Mandy opening her door
"yes" said Jack turning at her
"I feel like it"
"and i'll be glad to hear you"
"so" said Jack
"its Ian"
"what about him"
"I think I broke up with him and Claire knew about what we had and we're not friends anymore" said Mandy wiping her tears
"wow thats a lot for a day..you know Mandy some days can be soooo dark and yet its followed by a brighter day so maybe tomorrow would be better"
"I lost a best friend and a boyfriend at the same time how could this bring a brighter day"
"miracles happen Mandy they do" Jack smiled
"not this time Jack...not this time" said Mandy as she covered her self with her blanket
"Mandy" said Jack
"Jack please I just need to cry a little then everything would be ok"
"but.."
"Jack please" said Mandy and rushed to her
Jack sighed "are u sure you're gonna be ok" he said
Mandy didn't answer
"fine just remember I'm always here" he said as he closed the door behind him
END OF CHAP7
jack is gr8 brother

hehe , poor mandy

, i hate claire she seemed bad from the start
keep it going NG i read so fast
I am belated ... I just finished chapter 5
I will work on the next chapters