who knows

hey guys this is a wonderfull story ..that i found ..
i want to share it with you ..
it's long ..after i put each chapter you have to replay me
to let me know that some one is reading the stoy..

ok here is chapter one :

if car A and car B are walking in the same time but in different speeds ..and heading from the same destination …."
Oh god ..I wonder why is Mr. Colman is so interested about math..
I mean he can live with out these stupid rules . Melanie James thought , she was setting in the back of the class .. she hates math's classes she opened her note book pretending that she is righting what's on the board but she drew a funny car and she was driving it
and waving to Helen Mc lee the most popular girl in her high school
then she put thought bubble over Helen's head " I'm such a big loser"
then she laughed ..after a while she looked up to see her math teacher standing right over her desk:
Mr. Colman :"is there any problem Ms. James?"
Melanie with hidden laugh :" no "
Mr. Colman: "are you sure Melanie ? "
Melanie :"Yes"
The teacher walked away ..
"hay Mel " Jacob Gray Melanie's best friend whispered.
Melanie whispering: "ya jake?"
Jacob: " are you going to see sam and joe after the class?"
Melanie: "ya sure ..why?"
Jacob:" I thought that you had a fight last night?"
Melanie:" it's not the first time hehe"
Jacob:" oh ok .."
When the final bell rang ..Melanie went to her locker with Jacob then they saw Sam and Joe ..
Melanie waving: '' hay guys "
Then sam and joe got closer ..
Both: " hi "
Melanie pulled her skate bard from the her locker.
Then all of them walked to the exit door..
And before every one go in his own way Melanie said:
Melanie:" so are we still in our plans Friday night ?"
Sam:" ya we are going to the movies then we are going out for dinner "
Joe:" I don't know if I could make it guys "
Melanie: " What? ..no "
Joe:" I have a dentist at nine "
Melanie: " oh great "
Sam: " oh no now we can't be the three musketeers and the vampire "
Jacob: " hhhhh "
Melanie : " haha very funny ..OK see ya "
About her:
Melanie James is 17 years old girl who lives with here parents and her twin brother.. she has a really short black hair and a beautiful big blue eyes , thin but short .. Mel generally liked to boys better than to girls and she love all kinds of skating. She love camping and climb trees and do what boys do. plus she is on school's team of foot ball.
About her family:
Her father Mr. Oliver James works in a bank and her mother
Mrs. Julia James is a nurse and her twin brother William is punky boy he looks like Melanie but they don't like each other .
About her friends:
Jacob Gray (jake) is Melanie's best friend and he is really cute boy and big jurk too.
Sam Jackson cute black boy is 1 year younger than Melanie
Joseph Buckley (joe) the ladies man, funny blonde boy with spikey hair.. a lot of girls at school have a big crush on him but he don't even care ..

ok i'm waiting for you to complement

see ya

thnx girl i'll save it so i can read it later candybar/nod.gif

u r welcome
come on girls please replay candybar/hissyfit.gif

thanx xtina

More chapters please

thank god another 1 replay i thought the srory was boreing
..ok here is the another chapter:
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"I become so Nump , I can't feel you there , I become so tired so much more aware I've becoming this all I want to do is be more like.." Melanie was singing with her stereo so loud in her room then her mom shouted : " Oh please Stop your voice is a disaster "
Melanie: " whatever mom I'm gonna be a rock star one day "
Mrs. James:" ya that what you wish "
Melanie: " no I'm just kidding I know I can't sing I really have a bad voice "
Mrs. James : " ok can you turn it down please "
Melanie: " no way mom this is linkin park "
Mrs. James: " so ?"
Melanie: " that's mean R.o.c.k" (spilling)
Mrs. James walking away: " and here we go again "
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Next morning..
Mrs. James was knocking Melanie's door
Mrs. James: "wake up honey your going to be late for school"
Melanie whispering : "that's never was a bad thing .."
Mrs. James: "Melanie you know I'm not going till I see you going to the bathroom"
Melanie: "can I have 5 minutes please?"
Mrs. James:" of curse not ..wake up NOW"
Melanie: "ok then .. 3 minutes."
Mrs. James: "that's it .. from now no T.V"
Melanie; "ok I'm up"
When she finished she was wearing old baggy jeans pants and red in black T-shit and gray jacket, at breakfast she could not keep her eyes open .she thought: ok I have couple of minutes till my toast would pop out. She put her head on the table and she took a little nap.
After then she opened the front door and left for school forgetting her bag.
At art class :
Ms. Johanna: "Melanie tom please take the colors buckets and put them in the other side of the class."
Melanie:" great now I'm her best student .."
Tom: "yeah she likes you .."
Melanie: "oh no .."
Tom: "come on lets take the buckets .."
Melanie tried to carry a buckets and she does't knew it's was not closed tight then the paint covered the ground and Melanie
her cloths and her hands al most pink ..
" Melanie: "oh my god ..
All the class sow her and they started laughing .
Tom: "mel you look like marshmallows ha haha"
Melanie took a look at her self: "yeah I really look like marshmallows what I'm going to do"
At lunch every body was staring at Melanie hiding their laughs
Melanie sow Jacob ..
Melanie: "thank god jake you’re here.."
Jake looking at her:" what happened to you?"
Melanie: "don't ask .. please trying to forget it .."
Jake:" how .."
Melanie: "ok tell me do I look like jurk ?"
Jake:" hhhhhhhhh what's the big deal you look like a jurk all the time."
That's really hurts Melanie but every body say stuff like that so she pretend like she didn't care .
Melanie:" so it's the big Friday today ..thank good there is bo game even I missed the last one"
Jake: "oh right about that I'm not coming .."
Melanie screamed: "WHAT?"
Jake: "hay don't yell at me .. I have a big night"
Melanie: "ok can you tell me what's that the big thing is ?"
Jake: 'I got a real date .."
Melanie : "what? Since when you go in real date?"
Jake: "since today .."
Melanie: "who is she ? do I know her ? when you guys met ?"
Jake: "relax big mama she is Helen Mc Lee"
Melanie : "what? That blue eyeliner and tinny skirt girl ?"
Jake: "yeah she really hot .."
Melanie : " oh jake I did't know that you are tasteless"
Jake:" I don't know why you are upset ?"
Melanie:" I'm upset and mad because I'm gonna spend the night alone".
Jake: "what about sam?"
Melanie: "sam told me that he and his family are going to his grand mother" .
Jake: "ok try something new.."
Melanie:" forget it jake .."
And she walked away leaving him wondering why she is really upset it's not that big deal .
Melanie is not upset about their plan or sam and joe she is mad at jake he never leave her alone Friday night .. she never thought that he is going to leave her and go out with Helen Mc lee the girl she
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girls i've to tell you the story is kind long but not a BOOK's long candybar/evil5.gif

but i liked it ..i feel like it's a real story ..maybe it is i don't know
hope you like it too candybar/afro.gif

ok .. i'm glad you like it ..
i'll put more soon candybar/hearteyes.gif

and chapter 3 :

Chapter three))
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At 11 p.m she was listening to Eminem's song lose your self the phone rang at her room ..
Melanie: ya
Joe: "oh my god melanie guess what" ..
Melanie: "hay joe you get back early from the dentist "
Joe: "listen ..I got 6 tickets for linkin park concert next Monday"
Mylene: : " shut up … linkin park are having a concert here in canda ? "
Joe: yeah I know ..so what are you guys doing ?"
Melanie: " what do you mean guys?"
Joe: " you and jake and sam "
Melanie : " Hel-lo they canceled "
Joe: " oh ok what are you doing ?"
Melanie: " nothing I'm just bored to death "
Joe: " do you wanna hang out tomorrow morning ? "
Melanie: " I'd love to "
Joe: " ok see at starbucks "
Melanie: " yeah ok "
And they hang up ..
She went to bed but she dose not feel like sleeping so she went to see her brother .
She knocked William's door ..
He opened the door ..and he was holding his headphone
William : " yeah what do you want freak ?"
Melanie: " excuse me .. I'm the freak now ? "
William:" go a head and tell me what do you want?"
Melanie: " will I'm your older sis respect me "
William: " aaa by a minute and even if you was older than me by 10 years.. i'm not doing the thing you just said "
Melanie: " yeah baby? "
William : " don't yeah baby me "
Melanie: " whatever you think of me I want your guitar "
William : " and why is that miss Britney spears "
Melanie : " don't call me with that name just give me the guitar"
William: " No I'm NOT .. what are you going to do about it ? "
Melanie : " aaa I don't know maybe I'll tell every body at school that I'm your sister "
William: " No you can't we made a deal about this no brothering in school "
Melanie : " whatever ..I can do what I want when I want "
William: " aaah you win this time but you have to give it back to me alive "
Melanie: " yeah whatever"
And he bring the electric guitar and gave it to her and she went back to her room "
Melanie talking to her self : " aah ok of course I can sing I mean Britney spears better than me ? haaah she wish any way let's try this … mmmmm(trying to right a song)
Melanie singing : " now I'm feeling down ..and they're hanging around ..I can't d-side I'm believing … lala la la … lala "
Melanie: " ok that's was not so bad good job mel "
And she fall a sleep with guitar in her hands .

and chapter 4 hope you like it ..and keep the replay just to know
thanx candybar/hearteyes.gif

(Chapter four)
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Mylene's clock :" peep peep "
After 100 peep peep melanie remembered joe and going to starbucks ..she got up from her bed and went to change her pajamas and after then.. she was wearing jeans pants and and gray t-shirt .then She took her skate board and drive her self to starbucks .
And she sow him with a girl she freaked out .
Melanie 2 her self : why they are htey doing this why they like these girls ..
Joe sow her and waved .. she got closer ..
Joe :" hi melanie I wod like you to meat branda she is realy amazing girl . branda this is my friend melanie "
Branda: " oh you are a girl I always thought you were boy oops"
Melanie has been shocked what a silly girl..
Melanie to her self: " what she thought I was a boy why ? why why
I don't look like a boy .. I'm a .. C u t e girl .."
Joe know that melanie got upset about what branda's words and he tried to change the subject ..
Joe : " wod you guys like moka or hot chocolate? "
Melanie did't really listened to him and her feet drive her out side ..
And then to sam's home ..
Melanie knocked the door

Mrs. Jackson open the door
Mrs. Jacksonn: " oh hi melanie sweetie how are you ? "
Melanie 2 her self : does she really think that I'm sweetie ?
Mrs. Jackson : " melanie ? hello ok do you want me to call sam ? "
Melanie finaly realized : " yeah please "
And after couple of minutes ..sam walked through the door ..and his mom went to the kitchen ..
Sam: " hi melanie .. what are you doing here "
Mylene : " nothing just stopping by why are you busy? "
Sam:" no"
Melanie was quit for couple of minutes
Sam : " mylene something wrong ?"
Melanie : " sam can I ask you something ? "
Sam: " sure "
Mylene : " when you first met me did you thought I was a boy "
Sam stared at her for second and he laughed ..
Sam : " hahaha what ? "
Mylene : " no please answer me "
Sam : " no of course not can't you remember I met you in foot ball play ground "
Mylene : " so ?"
Sam: " at that playground its was for girls teams only "
Mylene : " what .. that's how you knew that I was a girl "
Sam: " hahaha I did't think about it "
Melanie : " SAM "she got mad for a sec ..
Sam: " hay I'm just kidding .. "
Melanie: " yeah I know ..ok I have to go now"
And she walked away leaving him wondering why she was upset ..
She left them all .. wondering what's happened to her .

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